Nice :)
I liked the song man, pretty well executed, nice riff, nice concept, nice lyrics, everything is fine.
I just found a little slip in the very begin of the song, it's in the 0:12 to 0:13, the timing was wrong, i don't know if it was on purpose, but if it was, sounded very strange.
Also, your voice was trembling a bit, and you sung a bit out of the guitar's rhythm, I could notice that in the harder part. The guitar was very cool, but it was soooo lonely, the piano was nice together, but in the end, I think you could add a drum, just like in "Sairway to Heaven", it would sound cooler and give more life to your voice!
Anyway, I liked the song, very well done, but it was a bit rough on the edges, you can make do an even better job if you add drums. It'll look soooo bad-ass... Keep it up man!
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RogerBK