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I gotta say this, man, I liked the beats, it's very different from what I ever listened, it sounded different, I liked the beat, but, it has no variations, you just made a beat and repeated it, with a break in the middle of them...
I think the song would be better if you cutted that break between the beats, and made a shorter start, with a low speaker, I couldn't hear the main riff, just the main beat...
I think that break was tottaly useless, it'd be fine if you just breaked it once, and added a different melody and a different beat, the song was w/out life, it sounded dead, and pretty dark, it looked strange... I just think you can fix those problems, and the song'll be fine... Keep it up, man,
(Review Request Club)
Roger